大作文:命题趋势+20备考建议+19英语一写作解析
先来回顾一下19年考研英语一大作文考了个什么题👇👇
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below.In your essay, you should
1) describe the picture briefly,
2) interpret the implied meaning, and
3) give your comments.
Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

【解析】
大作文审题阶段,应该关注三项基本信息:英文指令+图画信息+文字说明。
首先,英文指令包含三项信息,即:描述图画+阐述寓意+发表评论;图画信息可以从四个角度解析,即:所处环境+相关人/物+动作+相关话语;文字说明主要是对图画信息的总结或补充说明。
综合以上三点,显然两个人都在爬上的“途中”,但是两人人所说的话表现出两种不同的精神态度:“我不爬了(放弃)”+“再接着爬(持之以恒)”。当然,有同学从相互鼓励、互助、勇气……等其他角度进行解读,也是可以接受的。
【参考范文】
This drawing, apparently, can be associated with two distinct attitudes in front of adversities. Why? Then, let us closely observe it. On a journey to a high mountain, there is a youngster, sitting for a rest and sighing, “I am too tired to climb.” By contrast, his partner’s will is stronger, encouraging him to continue, although they are exhausted to the same extent. Two Chinese characters, finally, can be noticed, which says “on the journey”.
Successful individuals are featured by their various excellent qualities, including strong wills and the spirit of perseverance. However, a host of young people, in reality, tend to give up when encountering challenges during their pursuit of success. This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning and to my understanding, persistence can be likened to a road, leading to success. A case in point is me. As a senior who is preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduate, I am firmly convinced that perseverance always brings me power, arouses my enthusiasm for the future and helps me to conquer so many hardships.
As a matter of fact, the thought of “giving up” may constituted an obstacle that hinders many people’s growth and progress in work, life and study. Thus, everyone should bear in mind that “Never give up, you will eventually achieve your dreams.” (213words)
【参考译文】
显然,该图能联想到面对逆境时的两种截然不同的态度。为什么哪?接下来,让我们仔细观察一下图片吧!在一条通往大山的路上,有一个年轻人,坐着休息的同时还叹气道,“累了,我不爬了。”相反,他同伴的意志力更坚强,尽管他们都同样筋疲力尽,却还在鼓励他继续坚持。最后,我们注意到两个汉字,内容是“途中”。
成功人士的特征就在于他们身上包括坚强的意志力和持之以恒在内的各种优秀素质。然而,在现实生活中,很多年轻人在追求成功的过程中遭遇挑战时往往会放弃。这种现象非常值得关注。在我看来,坚持就是成功之路。一个典型的例子就是我自己。作为一个正在准备研究生入学考试的大四同学,我坚信持之以恒带给我力量,唤起我对未来的想往,帮我克服了如此多困难。
事实上,“放弃”这种想法已经构成了一种障碍,阻碍着很多人在工作、生活和学习中的成长和进步。因此,每个人都应牢记:永不放弃,你才会最终实现梦想。
【命题规律】
我算是服气了,很多同学考前拼命让我给押题,我说一定要复习真题,因为考研写作这几年最大的规律就是“旧瓶装新酒”,2019年的这篇大作文,在很大程度上重复了2004的主题(持之以恒),部分重复了2012年的形式(一个图中两人有不同的态度或精神品质)。
【建议】
无论您是听考虫的课程还是自学,都给大家两条建议:
建议1:在没有搞定往年的真题前,你没有必要也没有资格去搞任何的模拟预测去浪费时间
建议2:作文一定要提前开始背写,背了一定会忘,但只要你前期背写的扎实,后期很快就能回忆起来。但如果一直拖到最后,既要背专业课、政治还有作文,你可能焦头烂额,结果是哪一门都没复习好!
四六级考研复习中的困惑