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雅思小作文题目

The table below shows the changes of the percentage of visitors in 8 great countries that most international tourists visited in 2009 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

惊了？惊了！见惯了满眼数字的表，没见过表里仅有8个数字。很慌，很方，很正常。

定睛一看，分组其实依然很明晰：

1. 正数 即增长的（有多有少）；

2. 负数 即下降的；

3. 零 即没变的。

高分范文及解析

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In the table is the statistical presentation ← “数据化呈现”，是一种高bigger的说法 of the changed popularity with visitors, in percentage terms ←“以百分比计算”, of 8 Great Countries between 2009 and 2010.

Except the UK, 引导数值的从句句型之一（定语从句）→ which saw a 4-percent slight slip in the number of visitors, and France, whose popularity stayed unchanged, ←考虑到“负数组”仅一个国家，“零组”也仅有一个国家，所以干脆上来就把这两个国家写完，然后专心写“正数组”国家→ the other countries witnessed either a surge or a marginal increase of popularity. Germany stood out, 引导数值的从句句型之二（状语从句）→ as its number of tourists shot up, and had the fastest growth. In the US and China, the other two most desired tourist destinations, the number of visitors also grew fast ←要敢于不写具体数字，而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势. Meanwhile, the 6-percent growth in Spain is also noticeable, and the insignificant growth in Turkey and Italy ← 要敢于不写具体数字，而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势 contrasted sharply with the three previous countries.

Overall, the change of popularity between the two years varied markedly from one country to another.