高考常见读后续写类型破解

善良有爱的读后续写写法和常见语言汇总
善良有爱类作为高考常考的模式,一般发生在弱势群体(残疾,智障,没钱人,乞丐,单亲,被霸凌,贫穷)(比如2020年的山东卷高考)或者需要帮助的陌生人(比如2021年1月份的8省联考)身上,目的是为了传递社会真善美,宣扬社会主义核心价值观,行文无论是在语言还是情节推动模式上都有套路,龚露老师现在把这些套路按照3方面展开,以飨读者。如有补充,请在后台留言,感谢!
1. 情节推动模式

A有困难èB 帮助(通过放弃自己的东西,比如实物或者抽象物品)èA 渡过了难关,深受感动,万分感激B, 通过建立网站,Facebook, Brochure , leaflet ,magazine , post 宣扬自己的理念(传递真善美理念)  èB 觉得内心很满足,因为做了好事,同时也感慨:“只要人人献出一点爱,世界将变成美好的人间。” /同时也感慨,以后需要把爱传递下去。

2.善良有爱的读后续写常用的主旨升华句
第一种类型:感悟类

a.  It dawned on me that I was never alone, and additionally, it was our responsibility to pass on love--- the fraternity1 and kindness to others.

b.  It was then I realized that every small action of kindness can make a big difference to the world2.

c.  It suddenly dawned on me that I could buy fruit from them to reciprocate6 their kindness.

d.  It dawned on me that1 compared with false perfection externally1, internal kindness2 is more important.

第二种类型:名人名言类

a. His kindness to a stranger struck my heartstrings.9 Life is not a bed of roses, but love makes the world go around.3

b. It is the people’s kindness that made Dom and the student have a profound understanding of the saying “Rose given fragrance in hand”4.

c. Now, with strong faith in kindness and fraternity11, this grateful young man will embark on12 his college life and spread his love to13 other needy people. See, a magic virtuous circle9 is created!

d. Kindness will be late sometimes, but never miss.

第三种类型:强对比类

a. See the huge difference a small kind deed could make!

b. Behind sb’s cold appearance hid a warm and kind heart

c. Her warm words chased away the coldness in the air.

第四种类型:故事结局类

a. Thanks to the kindness of countless strangers, the student was fueled with endless courage4 to start his adulthood.

b. She had never received so many letters and she didn’t expect to feel the kindness from others since almost everyone at school always laughed at her. Letters which were full of love and warmth3 touched her deeply4.

c. Overwhelmed by2 my friends and families’ generosity and kindness, I felt my mental pressure was taken off3 and tears of gratitude blurred my vision9.

其他

a.“I am so glad that you did the right thing, especially in the season of Christmas, when Jesus wanted nothing but4 spreading fraternity, kindness and sympathy7 to those needy people.”

b. This Santa doesn’t come down our chimneys, but lives inside good and thoughtful people who really listen to friends, and then plan deliberate acts of kindness4.

c. Moved by her kindness, especially at a time when I needed comfort and reassurance. I hugged the beggar woman gratefully. Her eyes were twinkling with kindness and encouragement2. “Don’t lose heart. Just keep going.” She inspired me.

d.  After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. To my amazement, a luring red apple, on which capital letters2 “LOVE” were carved7, came into sight. Beside it was a heart-shaped note3 saying “Thank you for your kindness. Best wishes!” Eyes misting with grateful tears, I snatched out8 the apple, took a bite and drove on9.3 Such a kind family awoke me that love and kindness never vanish10 even if most people pissed me off either by giving me cold shoulder4 or refusing to help. Surely, I would pass on their fraternity5 and melt more needy people’s heart11 when the rest of the world tunes out12.

3. 善良有关的词群

1.needy people

2. People in need

3. the poor

4. the impoverished

5. the underprivileged /  the disadvantaged group / people

6. Need sb’s help desperately /badly

7. extend a helping hand to

8. come to sb’s assistance

9. it suddenly dawned on / occurred to / struck / hit sb that

10. give away sth

11. sacrifice sth

12. smiled warmly at sb

13. tears of gratitude misted / blurred sb’s eyes / vision

14. sb was touched beyond words

15. tears of gratitude brimmed over in sb’s eyes

16. Sth melt sb’s heart

17.Startled, the poor old lady looked up. Then, her painful expression softened1 and tears of gratitude began to roll down from her dull eyes2. Hands trembling, throat tightening, voice shaking, she thanked the man a million of times3.1

18. A thanked B a million of times

19. Behind sb’s cold appearance hid a warm heart

20. Roses given, fragrance in hand.

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