part2 逻辑应该怎么展开

宝宝们请比较这两篇，发现里面的共性~这是两篇7分水平的文章。7.5，8分需要更多时态，句式，词汇的调整~（小班课的宝宝们将会在课上看到更加详细的解释）

part2 Describe a friend you made recently

1 概述I’d like to talk about Cindy(who), a new friend (what)who I made last week(when) when I was shopping on the street(where).

2 原因 Well, I’d say this friend really appeals to me for a couple of reasons.

The first reason I think is that she’s of attractive appearance(原因1). Well, to be specific, she’s genuinely good-looking (解释1). I mean,her Roman nose, her jet-black hair, her smooth skin really allow her to stand out among people (进一步解释或举例) Apart from that, she’s genuinely a fashion icon(解释2). What I mean is that her clothes are quite chic, say pleated skirt, ripped jeans, cropped jeans, skinny jeans or stuff like that.（进一步解释或举例）

Showing great consideration for others is another reason that truly attracts me（原因2）. How can I put it, to be precise, whenever her friends are under the weather不舒服, she tends to take good care of them（解释1）. Like for example, yesterday, her friend Lily had a bad cold and a runny nose, Cindy bought some cold medicine for the sick girl which really touched Lily.（进一步解释或举例）  On top of that, she’s quite a good listener, if her parents feel really down(解释2). Like for instance, a couple of days ago, her mum had been fired and she listened to her mum for ages. You know, when her mother was complaining, Cindy always kept an eye contact with her mum and gave a hug from time to time, which, to a large extent, comforted her mother.  (进一步解释或举例)

3 感受So really, I do reckon that it’s worth making such a friend, and I guess I will （将来要怎么样）take a page from her from loads of aspects, from her appearance to her personality.

part2 Describe a neighbour

1 概述 I’d like to talk about Cindy(who), a neighbour(what) who I got to know a decade ago (when)when I was taking a lift in the apartment block(where).

2 原因 Well, I’d say this neighbour really appeals to me for a couple of reasons.

The first reason I think is that she’s of attractive appearance(原因1). Well, to be specific, she has a good-looking face(解释1). I mean,her Roman nose, her jet-black hair, her smooth skin really allow her to stand out among people(进一步解释或举例) Apart from that, she’s genuinely a fashion icon(解释2). What I mean is that her clothes are quite chic, say pleated skirt, ripped jeans, cropped jeans, skinny jeans or stuff like that（进一步解释或举例）

Showing great consideration for others is another reason that truly attracts me（原因2）. How can I put it, to be precise, whenever the people living next door are under the weather不舒服, she tends to take good care of them（解释1）. Like for example, yesterday, our neighbour Lily had a bad cold and a runny nose, Cindy bought some cold medicine for the sick girl which really touched Lily（进一步解释或举例）  On top of that, she’s quite a good listener, if any neighbour feels really down(解释2). Like for instance, a couple of days ago, a woman living opposite had been fired and she listened to the neighbour for ages. You know, when the woman was complaining, Cindy always kept an eye contact with her and gave a hug from time to time, which, to a large extent, comforted this neighbour (进一步解释或举例)

3 感受So really, I do reckon that it’s worth having such a neighbour, and I guess I will （将来要怎么样）take a page from her from loads of aspects, from her appearance to her personality.

这是两篇7分水平的文章。7.5，8分逻辑架构也是一样，但需要更多时态，句式，词汇以及英语思维的调整，以及增加细节的描述，具体怎么加我还会在课上详细阐述哒~