新高考全国卷I卷写作部分分析
第四部分 写作 (共两节，满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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文体难定：考生一出考场，就跟我讲，这次应用文考得和我们平时不一样，在确定文体上有卡壳现象，我大概问了一下内容，觉得是有点复杂。看到题目后还真觉得与我们平时练得不太一样。本题在审题上学生要费点心思。与我们平时的模拟卷，八省联考及近年的应用文相比，此次应用文可以说是新颖的了。平时的练习主要是书信或通知等应用文，体裁一目了然。这是一份投稿，有祝贺，祝愿，回顾。但应是祝贺的性质占主导。
字数把握：根据试题的提示，学生应该是有东西写的，但字数限制，学生须把握好各项的比例，要拿捏得当。估计字数肯定得在80以上了，字数在80-95之间为好。
内容：要求考生在对该报刊表达祝贺的同时写出自己对该报的经历，开篇应以祝贺语点题，再写经历，感受和期望。经历和喜爱的栏目可以整合在一起写，可以写自己是在什么情况下得知此报或读报时所受到的益处等。最后，给出对该报刊的期望和祝福，写作时注意文章要有逻辑和条理。
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise
they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when
they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and
chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was
nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down
the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first.
They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the
French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna
found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on
the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going
smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put
in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked
nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to
shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna
panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the
store was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to
cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he
gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught
the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black
as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in
disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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这篇读后续写讲的是一对双胞胎想在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜---为她准备早餐。但是因为没有经验，而把事情搞糟了，正在手忙脚乱之际，爸爸伸出了援助之手，帮助他们成功地做了爱心早餐给妈妈。
去年山东高考是关于帮助和爱的主题，涉及大人和孩子。今年出的是讲爱和帮助，母子之间的爱更加为考生所熟悉，有话可说，有情可抒。
值得注意的是，这个续写的体现的不仅仅是单纯地讲母爱，而且还讲遇到困难的时候，我们该如何积极寻求援助，如何与他人沟通，积极地迎难而上。这种组合的主题才是更好的升华。也是高考出题人的高明之处。能够写出这样的主题的学生才是高手。
其实高考的出题往往是大家在生活中常见的熟悉的话题，这也是大家在平时训练中的一个方向和趋势。细微处见真情，平凡中见伟大。