冠军诞生!爱趣英文第十期口语大赛结果公布!

经过两轮激烈的角逐,最终有五位同学进入了我们最终的决赛。

本次爱趣英文口语大赛经过一周的投票已经产生最佳人气排名。小布老师文末宣布各位选手得票情况和积分。


最终决赛规则

公号投票+教学组(卡卡老师,布老师,Nicki老师)打分积分制

决赛奖品设置:

第一名:第十一期爱趣英文课程铂金版免费学习+卡卡课堂专属定制冠军奖杯!

第二名:送一年早餐英文课程+英文原版卡卡签名书一本

优秀奖三位:卡卡英文原版签名书一本

01

Hello,I'm Smile,Never lose the passion for life, Never be afraid of trying new things, Never define myself by the past. I will be always on the way to the goal! Hope we can be together!

大家好, 我是Smile,永远不要失去对生活的热情,永远不要畏惧对新事物的尝试,永远不要用过去来定义自己。我将朝着这个目标一直在路上!期望我们可以一起!!

固定布局                                                        
工具条上设置固定宽高
背景可以设置被包含
可以完美对齐背景图和文字
以及制作自己的模板

Smile

每一次的改变都意味着无限可能,期待惊喜!

Smile

音准:

Strange的元音可以稍微再饱满些哦

语调节奏:很好

语法词汇(Nicki老师点评):

we also learned how to think and how to apply the method we learned to real life.应改为

I also learned how to think and how to apply the method I learned to real life./ We also learn how to think and how to apply the method we learn to real life.

We complained about the awful environment but it is we human who broke it.应改为

We complain about the awful air pollution but it is we human who have destroyed the environment. / We complained about the awful air pollution but it was we human who had destroyed the environment.

卡卡老师综合点评:你配音的演讲几乎就像你本身的演讲一样!在所有的配音素材中,你所选的素材是相对较难的,因为对于语速的要求很高。但是你的表示非常好,不仅仅是语速节奏很给力,整个演讲的气势,通过的声音几乎完美呈现出来。关于环保的演讲层层的细节,动之以情,晓之以理让人感受到我们每个人的责任。

评分:4.8分

02

Hi guys,this is Lynn,mother is the strongest and weakest creature in the world, it doesn't matter if you’re in your  twenties or thirties,no matter who you want to be,what you want to do,

just rembember:be yourself,love yourself,cause you’re deciding your life right now!

大家好,我是Lynn,母亲是世界上最坚强也是最脆弱的生物,不管你现在是20几岁还是30几岁,不管你想成为谁,做什么,记住:做你自己,爱自己,因为你正在决定你的人生!

如果你经历过黑暗,正处在黑暗,或者害怕面对黑暗,或许我可以成为那一束照亮你心田的微光,让我们在梦想前进的道路上不再孤单害怕!

Lynn

Lynn

音准:

Largest mother clearly加上儿化音会更加地道哦

Forgettable ge said 的元音口型稍小

语调节奏:很好

语法词汇(Nicki老师点评):

I still remembered at those dark moments建议修改为

I still remember those dark moments

when facing happiness and dream,I have more courage to chase! 建议修改为

when facing happiness and dream,I have more courage (to chase them)!

或and so I have more courage to chase my dream and happiness!

but it has been never stopped growing建议修改为

but it has never stopped growing

卡卡老师综合点评:非常棒的配音和演讲哦。你的声音甜美好听,关于大自然的对话让人非常动容,在配音时的感情表达也非常到位。结合自身的英语演讲,也非常让人感同身受。演讲的语言情真意切,引用的名言也是那样激励人心,不过有细微的音准失误,相信通过不断的练习,你一定可以接近完美哦!

综合评分:4.65分

03

Hello,Guys, I am Nan Nan~ I am a medical student who always believes that everyone is special in this world. Trust yourself, every shining point should be cherished. You deserve to be seen~

大家好,我是喃喃,一个在读医学生,我一直坚信每个人在这个世界上都是特别的存在~相信自己,每一个小闪光点都值得被珍视,你值得被看见~

喃喃

Let's step towards to our dreams together.You deserve to be seen,I believe that you are shining stars who have endless potential.

让我们朝梦想前进。你值得被看到,我相信你们是闪亮的群星,有无穷的潜力。

喃喃

音准:

Feeling felling混淆了

语调节奏:很好

语法词汇(Nicki老师点评):

I believed that the majority want to become a scientist, doctor, and an actor/actress.应改为

I believe that the majority wanted to become a scientist, a doctor, or an actor/actress.

Doctors can also be infected by Covid-19 and lose their life in this invisible war. 应改为

Doctors can also be infected by Covid-19 and lose their lives in this invisible war.

They have their family member to look after and they are afraid of losing family members too 应改为

They have their family members to look after and they are afraid of losing family members too

All I want to say is that treat doctor like normal people and they are never godlike people.应改为

All I want to say is that doctors are normal people and they are never godlike people.

卡卡老师综合点评:好唯美的声音,你对于的大自然-花的配音简直是一场听觉盛宴。你的语气语调,配音中,节奏和音准表现都十分有感染力。而你的演讲中,也是那样触动人心。你的演讲,拉近了我们和医护的距离,更让我们深刻感到你们的伟大。虽然你的演讲听起来并没有那样激昂,但你的声音,你的语言如如涓涓细流般流入每一个人的心田。

综合评分:4.6分

04

Hi, I'm Anita. I'm currently the owner of an aromatic care center, an HR manager of an electronics company, and most importantly, a mother of two kids. I'm very grateful for my life. And my faith is to live a meanful life and contribute as mush as I can to this world. Though I have done little, I'll definitely try my best to do more and more as time goes by. Never stop learning. Never stop growing.

大家好,我是Anita。目前我有一家自己的芳疗店,任一电子公司的人事经理,最重要的身份,是两娃妈。我一直对生活心存感激,人生信念,就是活得有意义,于这世界尽己之力。尽管我现在已做甚微,但吾余生将不遗余力为之努力。学无止境,永远成长。

You deserve the best version of yourself.

你要活出最精彩的自己。

Anita

Anita

音准:

Our加上儿化音会更加地道

语调节奏:非常好

语法词汇(Nicki老师点评):很好

卡卡老师综合点评:非常地道的配音,每一个角色都饰演地精妙绝伦,包括声音的特色,节奏以及语气都非常有画面感。你的演讲也非常打动人心,配合你的肢体语言,表情以及富有感染力的声音,让你关于梦想的主题那样触动,激励人心。

评分:4.85分 

05

Hello everyone,I’m Bill .I’m so glad that I can make some progress in oral English,which reminds me a classic saying: I’m a slow walker,but I never backwards. I hope I can keep this momentum.

大家好,我的英文名字叫Bill,我能在英语口语方面有一些进步真的很让我开心,希望我能保持这种势头,就像林肯说的那样,我虽然走得慢,但我从不后退。

Bill

耕耘于分秒,收获于细微。

Bill

音准:

Months s的音需要加强

Mother 加上儿化音会更加地道

语调节奏:and这里的衔接稍有不熟练

语法词汇(Nicki老师点评):

the expense of Covid-19 treatment was paid all by our government in the harsh time when this virus was breaking out 建议修改为:

the expense of Covid-19 treatment has all been paid by our government in the harsh time since this virus broke out

卡卡老师综合点评:乔布斯的演讲,你的声音配合得惟妙惟肖,发音标准得几乎和如同Native Speaker般。关于Covid-19的演讲,也让人心潮澎湃,演讲的逻辑衔接紧密,虽然有些地方稍有不熟练,但也是上乘佳作。

综合评分:4.65分

来来来揭晓最后的冠军!

投票结果:第一名Anita积分5分,喃喃和Smile票数相近积分4分,其余选手各积3分

于是各位选手的最终得分看下图

投票积分 教学组评分 总分 名次
Lynn 3 4.65 7.65 优秀奖
喃喃 4 4.6 8.6 优秀奖
Anita 5 4.85 9.85 冠军
Bill 3 4.65 7.65 优秀奖
Smile 4 4.8 8.8 亚军

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恭喜我们的Anita获得本次冠军!

而我们的奖品是!!

亚军获得送一年早餐英文课程+英文原版卡卡签名书一本

优秀奖三位:卡卡英文原版签名书一本

冠军将获得

卡卡课堂定制水晶奖杯+第十一期爱趣英文课程铂金版免费学习+以及上台分享!

再次感谢各位同学的参与!

希望各位同学在之后的学习和比赛中再接再厉!

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