2022年高考新题型读后续写素材练习答案解析汇总！ / 开普饭

1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Once upon a time, in a small village in Turkey, there lived a mother and her son.The son was known by all as Bald Boy because even though he was still quite young he had no hair on his head at all.

Bald Boy and his mother were very poor indeed and so each day Bald Boy would take up his basket and went out into the woods in search of food.

One day, as he was searching the forest floor for mushrooms, Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a young girl crying.When he looked up he noticed a little squirrel(松鼠）sitting on the branch of the tree above his head.The squirrel was crying inconsolably(无法安慰的）and so Bald Boy took the little creature in his arms.He comforted her and told her that everything was going to be okay.

When at last the squirrel stopped crying,the two friends got to talking and the Bald Boy explained how he lived with his mother and how they were very poor.

'I need to come into this forest each day in search of food because we have no money,'he told the squirrel.

It was then that the little squirrel said,'You have been very kind to me today so I am going to help you in return.'

Then the little squirrel jumped out of Bald Boy's hands and said,'Follow me.' The young boy followed the squirrel through the forest for many hours until they reached a cliff edge(悬崖边） that could see the green valley below.

'You must climb down this cliff,'said the squirrel.'When you reach the bottom you will find the Forest Queen.

She will ask you three questions and you must answer them all correctly to receive the prize.'

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered...

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'If you do not answer correctly,'she said in her cold voice,'then...

【参考答案】

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The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered the answers to the three questions in his ear. Then she jumped down and ran back into the forest.Bald Boy made himself a rope,then climbed down the cliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had told him the Forest Queen lived.When she saw him approaching, the Queen stopped Bald Boy and demanded that he answer three questions.

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'If you do not answer correctly,'she said in her cold voice,'then you will lose your head.''How many cherries are growing on this tree?''Where is the middle of the earth?''Which is the heavier of these two apples?' Confidently,Bald Boy spoke out the answers the squirrel had already told him.The Forest Queen could not deny that all three answers were correct and so she unwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold that was his prize. He thanked the squirrel in his heart and happily returned home to his mother with the gold.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章主要讲述生活在一个小村庄里的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。一天，这个秃头男孩遇到一个哭的伤心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。

【详解】

续写第一段开头为：松鼠爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，小声说……后面应该写小松鼠怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林女王的过程。

续写第二段开头为：“如果你答错了，”她用冰冷的声音说，“那么……后面应该写秃头男孩回答上森林女王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。

【点睛】

文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运用恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如Bald Boy made himself a rope, then climbed down the cliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had told him the Forest Queen lived. The Forest Queen could not deny that all three answers were correct and so she unwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold that was his prize. 这里的宾语从句和定语从句相结合使用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。

2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.

One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home, we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.

Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that’s okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”

A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She is my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that’s okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.

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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.

【参考答案】

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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her father’s hands determinedly.

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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenny was able to say something. her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

读后续写主要以故事类文本为主，考生在阅读时，不应该走马观花看情节，而应找出文章的六要素（who, when, where, what, how, why），然后将每个主要事件都用六要素串联成一句话。这样一来，冗长的故事就成了两三句，文章的结构自然清晰明了。同时，考生还应该分析已给出的两个开头句包含的主要句子结构，这样才能保证正确的写作方向。为了写出符合故事发展的“尾巴”，必须先分析原文的情节发展方向。除了采用上文提到过的六要素分析法，在审题时还应该着重分析三个点：起因、转折、高潮。只有确定了故事的起因，考生才能合理推断这个起因会导致的可能结果；只有确定了故事的转折，考生才能合理地将故事发展下去。不过，在设计情节时，同样要考虑六要素，将它们串联成一句话，再将这句话添砖加瓦变成段落。在语言方面，注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切，合理使用高分词汇、短语及句型；不要抄原文，情节合情合理；书写美观，保持卷面整洁。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了高级句子When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly.使用了状语从句的省略，和with复合结构；Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.使用了非谓语动词做状语；Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing.使用了which引导的定语从句。这些为文章增色不少，而且全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

We moved on into the jungle-- a forest where large numbers of tall trees and plants grow very close together. Old Mali went in front and I followed close behind him. We stopped for the night about an hour before it began to get dark.

Old Mali lit a fire. When it was bight he showed me how to make a bed with moss（青苔，苔藓）.

It was soft and comfortable.

―Mali, how did you learn to make such a bed? I asked.

―I learned to make beds like that, Mali replied, ―by watching and listening to others. That is the real way to learn anything.

―Will you let me watch you always? I asked Old Mali. ―I want to learn all the things you know about the jungle.

When we had finished our supper, Old Mali got onto his bed and lay down. It was now completely dark. In the fire light, Old Mali seemed to be fast asleep on his bed. I suddenly felt alone and afraid.

All day in the jungle, while we had been walking, I had heard noises of animals. Now they seemed to be much nearer. The jungle was now a wall of blackness in the light of the fire.

I felt frightened and suddenly my mouth went dry. I wanted to scream. I felt my mouth opening wide, ready to scream as loud as possible.

But I did not scream. I saw Old Mali’s face in the firelight. This made me feel ashamed. I held my teeth tightly together to stop myself from screaming. I lay down and closed my eyes.

As soon as I closed my eyes. I heard a thousand noises. The whole jungle became alive with animals moving quietly and carefully all around me. Suddenly Old Mali took a deep breath and made a noise. I was hearing so many imaginary noise and the real noise made by Old Mali gave me a terrible fright.

I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I pulled my knife out and held it above my head.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire.

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Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better.

【参考答案】

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I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire. Through the burning fire, I believed I saw its sharp teeth and cruel red eyes. Its craws would insert into my flash without mercy as soon as I came into its sight. I couldn’t help trembling and screaming loudly at the thought of it. Then a soft voice came from the dark, “Are you Okey?” It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide open.

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Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better. Adjusting breath quickly and observing carefully, I found the “animal” was just the shade of trees. I laughed in relief and told Old Mali what had happened just now. Having known the whole story, Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences in jungle. With these stories, I got back to my bed and lay down. Exhausted, I closed my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching, I soon fell fast asleep. That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

通读短文可知，作者跟随着Old Mali进入了丛林。夜色降临，吃完晚饭作者和 Old Mali各自休息，但作者一闭上眼睛就听到各种动物的声音，续写由此展开。第一段以“我去看看火边有没有野兽”开始，所以接下来要叙述作者所误认为的“野兽”以及当时作者的心理活动。这是Old Mali已经醒来，问作者“还好吗”。第二段以“Old Mali平静的声音让作者感觉好多了。”所以要接着写Old Mali告诉了作者所谓的“野兽”就是树的影子，并与作者讲起了以前的丛林经历，作者听了这些故事，很快入睡，那晚是作者最难忘的经历。

【点睛】

本篇范文层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色。使用高级句型有：…if there was a wild animal beside the fire和as soon as I came into its sight使用了状语从句；It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide open.使用了强调句型和with复合结构：Adjusting breath quickly and observing carefully, I found the “animal” was just the shade of trees.和Having known the whole story,…使用了非谓语从句；…what had happened just now使用了宾语从句；Exhausted, I closed my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching,…使用了形容词作伴随状语和非谓语动词结构；That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.使用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句。

4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

At Dana’s yard sale, Tim chose a baseball from the toys spread on the card table and asked about the price. Dana told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton toy rat. It was grey with some cotton sticking out from the hole where an ear had been torn off.

“Nezumi is extra special, so he is ten dollars. He needs a safe new home.” Dana sighed. Tim laughed saying he didn’t have ten dollars. Dana laughed too and gave Nezumi to Tim as a free gift because he was her friend. When Tim whispered it was sort of old, Dana said old toys were the best. She then invited Tim to her birthday party the next evening, adding that her parents were giving her a real rat for her birthday. Tim was amazed and asked if it was a live rat.

“Of course.” Dana said.

At home, Tim’s mother showed him the gift she had bought for Dana. It was a knitting spool(针织线轴) shaped like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf for her doll. Tim sighed that Dana wasn’t a knitting kind of person but a rat kind of person. Mom laughed after knowing what had happened. Together they drove to the pet store, where Tim searched and searched and selected a clear plastic ball, one in which the rat could run around on the floor safe from cats and dogs. Tim thought of Nezumi’s ear and decided Dana’s new rat would need this ball.

The next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim, she asked if Tim brought Nezumi to school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim was at a loss because Nezumi was at home on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he was giving her. Tim replied it was a surprise. In silence they sat for a while before he heard Dana say her parents were giving her a new bike for her birthday instead of a live rat because they thought rats would bite things.

注意:

1. 所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

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At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.

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All of a sudden, he had an idea.

【参考答案】

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At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball. Wondering about the use of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face. Mom was surprised and asked him what was happening. Tim told her Dana wasn’t getting a live rat from her parents but a bike. As they were racking their brains (绞脑汁) to come up with an appropriate gift, Tim turn around and saw Nezumi on his bed.

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All of a sudden, he had an idea. He lifted Nezumi and squeezing Nezumi into the plastic ball with great caution so that Nezumi would be safe from cats and dogs. Seeing this, Mom asked Tim whether he was giving Dana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile saying she would definitely like it. Looking at Mom’s confused expression, Tim added that Dana was a Nezumi kind of person who thought old toys were the BEST.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

通过阅读所给文章可知，Tim从Dana的庭院旧货出售会得到了有一只耳朵被扯掉了的玩具老鼠Nezumi，Tim很喜欢。Dana的生日快到了，Tim去商店里为Dana喜欢的老鼠买了一个透明的塑料球，可以让它在里面跑，不会被猫和狗咬伤。第二天Tim听到Dana说她的父母给她的生日礼物是一辆新自行车，而不是一只活老鼠，因为他们认为老鼠会咬东西。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天下午在家里，Tim盯着塑料老鼠球。所以后文应该是讲述Tim得知Dana不会受到老鼠作为生日礼物后的心理活动，他觉得买的这个塑料老鼠球没有用了，于是他皱着眉头开始在房间里走来走去。妈妈很惊讶，问他发生了什么事。Tim告诉她Dana从她父母那里得到的不是一只活老鼠，而是一辆自行车。当他们绞尽脑汁想出合适的礼物时，Tim转过身，看见Nezumi躺在床上；第二段开头是：突然，他有了一个主意。本段应该写Tim为Dana准备生日礼物的过程，Tim要送Dana一只长着一只耳朵的老鼠。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：walk up and down, not…but…, with great caution等高级词汇；Wondering about the use of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face.非谓语动词的运用和if引导的条件状语从句；Seeing this, Mom asked Tim whether he was giving Dana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile saying she would definitely like it.运用了whether引导的宾语从句等高级句式。

5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Freddie woke up to see it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, the cars, the houses, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.

“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regular morning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.

“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous. I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school buses for the day.”

Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get to school?”

His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”

Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first?

“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a few minutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and then sat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It was relaxing, thought Freddie.

After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’t really like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.

“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit? It’s good to get some fresh air, and who knows, you might even enjoy yourself.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed outside.

Standing alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good time. Knowing his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, the faster he could go back inside to his video games. He set to work packing up some snow into a large ball.

Moments later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his house up the street. Dion waddledout in his big snow trousers and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.

“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dion laughed.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.

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Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.

【参考答案】

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Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, would you?” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid base and lifting a heavy snowball on top of it. Dion found some stones for buttons, and Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. Finally, the snowman was finishes! Then, they both had a good time. Suddenly, Dion said, “Hey, I know what we can do next!” He told Freddie his idea and Freddie grinned.

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Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, his mother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in?” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Still excited, he asked his mother if he could go to the park with Dion and go sledding down the hill. Knowing Freddie would rather enjoy himself outside, his mother agreed without hesitation. “Snow day are the best” Freddie yelled as he ran off to play with his friend.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连日积雪而停课时，Freddie激动不已，心想着终于可以宅在家里打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议他出门去堆个雪人，呼吸下新鲜空气。Freddie不情愿地来到院子，堆了个大雪球，同学Dion突然出现，兴奋地想要成为Freddie的同伴，同时表示喜欢雪天带来的快乐。

在给的第一段开头“Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.”中“happy”一词可以想象两人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快乐场景；同时第二段开头“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈现了Freddie的情感及态度变化。而“idea”一词可以推测两人在堆完雪人后有了进一步的想法，而这个想法也一定和户外玩雪所带来的快乐相关。

【高分句型一】

As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. 当Dion找了一些石头做纽扣时，Freddie就把几根断了的树枝插进身体里做胳膊。运用时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】

His mother agreed without hesitation because she knew Freddie enjoyed himself outside. 他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外面玩得很开心。运用原因状语从句。

6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if it had just happened.

I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I said yes without hesitation.

I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to a

nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare, I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch：6 pm. I was two hours late!

I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in a corner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.

I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station and asked if there was anything wrong They told me you never picked up the car. So, you see, I know there's nothing wrong with the car at all.'

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph 1:

A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.

Paragraph 2:

But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here , and it's dark. You can't walk back. ' I begged.

【参考答案】

Paragraph 1:

A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him，“I'm angry, not with you but with myself. You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years”.

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But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. ' I begged. My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down. and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced.However it was also the most successful lesson.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者驾车去接他的父亲，但是他因为去看电影而耽误了时间后，他谎称去修车了，最后谎言被拆穿了，这使得父亲非常生气。

【详解】

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一股负疚感席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因……，所以应该写父亲对此的反应是什么以及父亲的情感此时影视什么样的。第二段开头是：可是，爸爸，那儿离这儿正好十八英里，而且天又黑。你不能走回去。我恳求。本段应该写父亲对我这么做的反应是什么以及我的心里活动是什么以及我从这件事情当中得到了什么经验教训。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：protest，apologies，ignore等高级词汇；非谓语动词 I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me，Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him. as引导的状语从句，I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me.that引导的宾语从句。

7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

A gift of gold

It was the winter of 1937, just after Christmas. The Depression was still going on, but I was in good spirits. I was going to graduate from elementary school, but my mother still dressed me in shorts. Most of my classmates had given up wearing shorts. For the graduation ceremony, all the boys were expected to wear white shirts and dark blue wool pants.

I waited until a week before I told my mother. On a cold Monday afternoon I went home from school.

“Mom,” I said, “about graduation...”

“Yes?” she answered.

“They are going to give me the first-prize medal,” I said.

Still working over the stove, she looked over her shoulder at me and smiled broadly. “That’s wonderful, Babe. Dad and I will be both there, and we’ll be the proudest.”

She must have seen by the look on my face that something was wrong. She turned her back and said, “So?”

“So, I have to get long pants,” I said.

“Babe, we don’t have money for new pants right now,” she said.

“Okay,” I burst out.“Then I won’t go to graduation. Plus, I’m running away from home!”

“If I were you, I wouldn’t pack my bags. We’ll solve the problem of pants somehow,” she said.

The following Saturday, when my mother said “Let’s go shopping”, I knew that she had solved the problem. Then we left home. We took the trolley (有轨电车) and got off at Southern Boulevard, the best shopping street. The clothing store was just a couple of blocks away.

But first we walked a short way down the Boulevard and stopped at a place I had never noticed before.

“Wait here,” she said. Then she entered a storefront that looked like a bank and opened the door with the hand with a gold wedding ring on her ring finger.

She went out about ten minutes later with a purse in her left hand, and then we went to the pants store. I chose a pair of pants. After a patient bargain with the seller, my mother bought it at the price of three dollars and fifty cents and handed it to me.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph 1:

I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money.

Paragraph 2:

We took the trolley back home.

【参考答案】

Paragraph 1:

I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money. As soon as I turned around, I saw her take a sum of money out of her pure in her left hand. I didn’t know where my mom got all this money from. Finally she handed this money for the pants to the seller, who immediately gave my mother the fifty cents change. Mom smiled at me and said, “Let’s go back, honey.”

Paragraph 2:

We took the trolley back home. And the trolley was crowded with many people, so my mother and I were standing together all the time. However, I even imagined walking up to the stage in my new pants to receive my medal, and I couldn’t help laughing. When we got home, my mother took out the key and wanted to open the door. And at that moment, I noticed that the gold wedding ring on her ring finger my mother had always worn was missing. Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad, lost in thought.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

通过阅读所给文章可知，1937年的冬天，作者即将参加小学毕业典礼，他告诉母亲他需要一条裤子参加毕业典礼，但当时作者的家里买不起一条新裤子。作者的母亲告诉作者会想办法解决。有一天，作者和母亲坐有轨电车来到了商业街，作者的母亲先进入了一家看起来像银行的店铺，之后花了三美元五十美分给作者买了一条裤子。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当我妈妈去付钱的时候，我把裤子紧紧地抱在怀里。所以应该写我抱着新裤子，看着母亲去付钱，当我看到母亲拿出钱的时候，我心中疑惑：母亲的钱是从哪来的。最后母亲付完款喊我回家。第二段开头是：我们乘坐电车回家了。本段应该写我和母亲在拥挤的电车上，但我却想到我穿着新裤子去领奖，这让我忍不住笑出声来。当我们到家，母亲去开门的时候，我注意到一直戴在母亲手上的金戒指不见了。我猜到母亲把它卖了，我感到很难过并陷入了沉思。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，情节生动，内容完整，符合题目要求。范文中使用的一些词汇和句型值得我们学习。高级词汇/短语，如：As soon as，immediately，be crowded with，couldn’t help doing，lost in thought等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Finally she handed this money for the pants to the seller, who immediately gave my mother the fifty cents change.强调句型Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad, lost in thought.。

8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.

On such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my fiveyearold brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys，” the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color, “that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all！”

Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold and biting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your young brother！” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.

“Christine! I'm going to find the Lego section (乐高积木区)! There's a new pirate ship I want, and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it！” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wideeyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie (芭比) World.

I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered (闪烁) once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph 1：

“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？”

Paragraph 2：

“Christine, I'm here.”

【参考答案】

Paragraph 1：

“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？” Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to see, hug my brother and make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candies and tripped over toys, while calling my brother's name like crazy. Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.

Paragraph 2：

“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher. He was standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship set. I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.” Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

续写短文需要先理清所给短文内容，掌握文章脉络，可以先逐段总结大意：

第一段：交代时间和天气背景，周六下午，大雨滂沱。

第二段：交代人物和事件，作者的母亲带她和五岁的弟弟去一家玩具店。

第三段：兴奋的姐弟俩先于母亲之前冲进了商店，母亲在后面大喊让作者照顾好弟弟。

第四段：弟弟跑去了乐高积木区，作者还没来得及赶上去就被芭比娃娃给吸引住了。

第五段：沉迷于芭比娃娃的作者被外面的闪电吓到了，让她想起可怕的事情。

根据各段大意可知，这是一篇记叙文，已经将主干部分交代清楚，接下来应该按照故事的脉络继续发展下去，续写的第一段开头为：“噢不，”我想到，“Christopher哪儿去了？”也就是作者发现自己的弟弟不见了故事产生了悬念，所以该段的续写可以考虑从作者心情焦急、四处寻找弟弟这一方面去描写，其中可以参照原文的风格，加入一些细节描写和心理描写，制造悬念越紧张越好；而续写的第二段开头为：“Christine，我在这儿呢。”相当于是悬念后的一个反转，作者的弟弟并没有丢，所以该段的续写可以考虑从作者心情上的转变以及找到弟弟后两人的行动上去展开。

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