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读后续写是什么？

题目提供一篇350词左右的材料（一般是记叙文），要求考生依据该材料内容情节（部分省份会提示关键词）以及所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150词左右）。此外，如果原文中提示了关键词，则需要续写的两个段落要用到至少5个关键词，每个段落都给出了第一句。

读后续写考什么？

1. 核心素养：

语言能力：阅读和写作

思维品质：想象能力和创新精神

2. 具体来说考查以下四个方面

把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力

语言运用的准确性和丰富性

对语篇结构的把控能力

创造性思维能力

评分标准是什么？

得分要素：

1. 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。

2. 内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况。

3. 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。

4. 上下文的连贯性。

评分细则

1. 与原文故事情节融合，逻辑合理。

2. 续写内容丰富有看点，用了关键词。

3. 语法结构和词汇多样。

4. 语句衔接自然，结构紧凑。

解题思路

第一步，认真阅读原文，理清原文故事情节。

第二步，回扣原文，结合段首句确定剧情走向。

第三步，合理想象细节，拟写草稿。

第四步，丰富细节，润色。

Part One 例题呈现

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150词左右。

The cheerful girl, Jenny, with golden hair was almost five. Waiting with her mother at the checkout stand, she saw a necklace of shining white pearls in a pink metal box. Quickly the mother checked the back of the little metal box and then looked back into the begging blue eyes of her little girl's upturned face. “A dollar and ninety-five cents. That's almost＄2. If you really want it, I'll think of some extra housework for you and in no time you can save enough money to buy it for yourself. Besides, you might get another dollar bill from Grandma on your birthday a week away.”

After dinner back home, she did more housework and even she asked the neighbor for housework for ten cents. On her birthday, Grandma did give her another new dollar bill and at least she had enough money to buy the cheap necklace from the dime store(廉价商店). Jenny loved her pearl necklace. It really made her dressed up and grown up. She wore it everywhere. The only time she took it off was when swimming.

Jenny had a very loving daddy and every night when she was ready for bed, he would stop whatever he was doing and come upstairs to read her a story. One night when he finished the story, he asked Jenny, “Do you love me?” “Oh, Daddy. You know that I love you.”

“Then give me your necklace.”

“Oh, Daddy, not my pearl necklace. But you can have my Barbie doll—the one you gave me. She’s my favorite.”

“That’s okay, Honey. Daddy loves you. Good night.” And he brushed her cheek with a kiss.

Daddy repeated the same request about a week after the story time. However, Jenny refused and wouldn’t give up her necklace to her daddy.

Paragraph 1：

A few nights later when her daddy came in, Jenny was sitting on her bed, waiting for her father.

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Paragraph 2：

With tears in his own eyes, Jenny’s kind daddy reached out

one hand to take the cheap necklace.

Part Two 续写步骤

Step 1 审清文章大意，理清故事发展线索

Step 2 根据故事情节发展，合理续写段落内容

Part Three 范文欣赏

One possible version for your reference：

A few nights later when her daddy came in, Jenny was sitting on her bed, waiting for her father. As he came up, he noticed her lips were trembling and tears rolled down her cheeks. Surprised and confused, he asked “ What’s the matter, Jenny?” Without reply, Jenny buried her head deep. After much wavering, she made up her mind and lifted the metal box up with her little hand to her daddy. Puzzled, her father opened it and found a necklace inside. It was her favourite pearl necklace! With a little trembling voice, she finally said, “Daddy. It’s for you.” She gave her treasure to her father eventually, “you are the most important person.”

With tears in his own eyes, Jenny’s kind daddy reached out one hand to take the cheap necklace. Meanwhile, with the other hand reaching into his pocket, he pulled out a blue box with a necklace which is made of natural pearls and gave it to Jenny. “Dear, you deserve a better one .” So delighted and moved was Jenny that she suddenly realized Daddy had had the necklace all time and was just waiting for her to give up the cheap necklace made of artificial pearls so he could give her a genuine treasure of great value. Jenny was very glad to take the necklace and it was so exquisite that Jenny can hardly put it down. With a big smile appearing on her face, she learned that love is beyond value.

It is from

刘妍婷

录取大学：上海财经大学

高考英语分数：141 听说分数：14

个人励志语：勤能补拙，水滴石穿