阅卷老师最想看到的英语作文4种开头、结尾和常用句型汇总

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英语写作四大步骤
“一审”即审题:抓住要点,注意文体是什么,准备写作的人称和时态:如果是日记和故事,宜采用过去时态;如是简介之类的,宜采用现在时态。
“二写”即列纲:考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬长避短,避难就易。综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
“三连”即连句成文:按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落。要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用。
“四改”即修改润色全文:主要是看全文符不符合题目要求,行文是否流畅,有没有遗漏要点;语法是不是正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文:主要内容层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
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好作文开头的四种方式
 1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:
Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。
如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:
Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:
I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.
或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:
Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:
If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:
I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
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作文结尾的四种方式
1.自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:
The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:
When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3. 反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:
If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?
4. 表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:
I hope the farmers  life will be better and better.
另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
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好作文常用的句型
状语从句举例:
If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
常用状语从句句型
(1)时间:when, not…until, as soon as
(2)目的:so that+从句; to do(为了)
(3)结果:so…that+从句, too…to do(太……以至于……)
(4)条件:if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)
(5)让步:though,although,even though,even if,no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
(6)比较:as…as…, not so…as…, than
重点句型
(1) It is said that + 句子 据说…     It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
(2) There is no need to do 没必要做…
(3) It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
(4) so /such… that … 如此… 以至于…       too … to do 太… 而不能…
(5) not…until… 直到…才… 例:I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。
(6) The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
(7) The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)
(8) That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
(9) That is because + 句子 那是因为…
(10) as we all know, +句子 据我们所知
(11) It is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 众所周知
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