六级写作话题之微笑
2013年6月全真试题
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”You can cite some examples to illustrate your point.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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解析
从审题角度看，本次作文体裁是essay，话题是smile；内容方面要求是commenting on the remark 和cite some examples; 值得关注的是本次作文主题看似简单，因为smile的话题很熟悉，导致不少学生忽略 shortest distance between two people的限制。综合smile, shortest distance, between two people等信息，本文应重点写smile 对人际交往的影响。
范文MODEL TEXT：
Suppose individuals intend to shorten their distance with others, it is advisable for him to keep smiling in communication.Therefore, when hearing the remark “ A smile is the shortest distance between two people” we can appreciate its connotation: obviously, this saying can be naturally linked to the significance of smiling in human communication.In our daily life, a host of individuals find it rather comfortable to communicate with those with smiles.Meanwhile, it is a common phenomenon for us to regard smiling as a symbol of kindness, friendship or warmth.Our life has been filled with a variety of examples like this:smiling helps friends to enjoy close friendship; smiling helps family members to enjoy harmonious atmosphere; smiling even helps strangers to break embarrassment.Actually, it is one's smile that enables him to build a closer relationship between others.As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of smiling for successful communication.As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to face life with smiles.Accordingly, we can shorten the distance between friends, classmates and acquaintances.Spring no efforts to keep smiling every day, we can witness a promising and hopeful life in future.
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ESSAY
有一句简单却发人深省的话：微笑是两个人之间最短的距离。显然，这句话可以联系到微笑在人际交往中的重要性：如果一个人想要缩短与他人的距离，时刻保持微笑是很明智的做法。在我们的日常生活中，我们普遍将微笑视为善良、友好、温暖的象征。同时，许多人发现与随时保持微笑的人交谈会更舒服。我们的生活中充满了这样的例子：微笑使朋友们的友情更加紧密；微笑使家庭成员感受到和谐的氛围；微笑使陌生人之间打破尴尬。事实上，一个人的微笑能使他与他人建立起更亲密的关系。事实上，大多数聪明人都意识到了微笑对于成功的重要性。作为青年人，我确信我们有必要以微笑的状态面对生活。因此，我们可以缩短与朋友、同学、熟人之间的距离。将努力每天都保持微笑，我们可以在未来拥有充满希望的生活。
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