读后续写 之 环境描写
注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。
自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用
1.衬托或突出人物性格、心理等
2.暗示或推动故事情节发展
3.增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调
4.揭示主题，深化主旨
1.气氛氛围
A heavy silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静）
A hush fell upon the class. （描写教室寂静）
The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.(描写屋内环境）
An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗）
It didn’t take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.(描写森林变暗）
There were a deathly stillness in the house.（描写死寂）
There was a moment of sinister silence, then a multitudinous stirring of the leaves.（描写暴风雨前的死寂）
An air of sadness settled over the group. （描写悲伤氛围）
It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension.（描写紧张气氛）
The silence of the forest was ripped apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静）
There was no view anywhere, nothing but the oppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的树林）
3.江河湖海、山川峡谷、植物草地
The gurgle of the stream soothed me. （描写潺潺流水）
A clear little stream ran quite merrily along its narrow way.(描写欢快的溪流）
The fragrant flowers attracted lots of birds, lingering around them.(描写花香鸟语）
The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.(描写天空映衬下的湖面）
The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.（描写波光粼粼的水面）
Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.(描写黎明的海洋）
The expanse of blue water stretched in every direction to the horizon, frothy waves lapping at a sand beach.(描写海水拍打沙滩)
The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine.（描写阳光下的沙滩）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away into the distance from the towering bluffs like the beautiful streamers of a fairy maid.（描写瀑布）
The meadow was a glorious expanses of grass and meadow flowers, grass rustling gently in the breeze.(描写青青草地)
Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.（描写杂草）
The meadow flowed like a sea of green over the hill, studded with the purple of thistles.(描写漫山的花草）
The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.(描写山峰）
The valley seemed to grow quieter and quieter as he sat and stared at the bright delicate blueness. (描写山谷的寂静）
4.天气（风雨雷电，阴晴冷暖，雾雪冰霜）
The wind, so soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.（描写柔风）
A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.（描写微风拂柳）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale world hidden deep within.（描写微风）
The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描写微风）
The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind.（描写狂风）
The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风）
It was the odour that always precedes a thunderstorm, and a nameless fear clutched at my heart. (描写暴风雨来临前）
Wind and rain now whipped the house.（描写风雨击打窗户）
The drizzle kissed me on my cheeks gently. （描写细雨）
It has rained without ceasing for many days, with great gusts of wind.（描写刮风下雨）
The thunder was rumbling in the distance. (描写雷电）
A fierce wind was roaring while the pounding rain was beating the ground. The rumble of thunder was heard in the distance.（描写风雨雷电）
The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.（描写雷声）
Though the rain stopped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sounds.(描写雨停风来）
A glimmer of light spilled into the corridor. 一缕微光洒入走廊。（描写阳光洒进走廊）
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.（描写阳光）
The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.
The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicious unblinking yellow eye staring down at me from the cloudless sky.(描写正午毒辣的阳光）
In this heat even the trees appear defeated.(描写天气极热）
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in.（描写阳光洒进窗户）
The fog was beginning to clear and a full moon shone brightly. （描写雾气消散）
The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun.(描写薄雾消散）
The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(描写下雪）
The wind howled, piling up snow in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust. (描写晚上下雪场景）
5.动物（飞禽走兽，鱼虫）
Birds were chattering/twittering somewhere.（描写鸟喳喳叫）
The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks.(翩翩飞舞的云雀）
The forest is the orchestra consisted by birds, playing one enchanting symphony after another.(描写鸟的合唱）
The birds flew through that ever developing canvas of the dawn, as if their wings were fine quills, drawing such buoyant hues.(描写鸟在天空飞翔的美妙画面）
The howl of wolves thundered and made the hair on her neck rise.（描写狼叫）
Then, on his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plowed over the water as a speed-boat does.(描写鲨鱼）
The shark’s jaws opened wide, revealing rows of razor-sharp teeth.(描写鲨鱼）
6.春夏秋冬
My fingers lingered almost unconsciously on the familiar leaves and blossoms which had just come forth to greet the sweet southern spring. （描写春意盎然）
The previously denuded branches offered their wands of tight green bud to the brilliant rays of spring.(描写枯枝发芽)
The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up.(描写春草）
An overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the atmosphere, filled with uneasy discomfort. （描写夏天的热）
Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in.(描写夏去秋来）
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.(描写秋天脚下的落叶)
The autumn breeze tousled her hair and pinked her cheeks.(描写秋风拂面）
The leaves had almost fallen off, creating a sea of fiery colors that crunched beneath our feet.(描写秋天落叶）
Freezing winter marched into the village. (描写寒冬）
The earth seemed benumbed by his icy touch, and the very spirits of the trees had withdrawn to their roots, and there, curled up in the dark, lay fast asleep.（描写寒冬）
The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue.(描写冬天的雪)
7.天空、日出日落
White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the broad ocean.（描写蓝天白云）
White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the broad ocean.（描写白云）
The sun rises as a canopy of gold, bright amid the blue, bidding the stars to take their nightly rest.(描写日出）
The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.(描写日落）
The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun reflected in the windows.(描写夕阳）
The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamonds. (描写星空）
The stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.(描写星空）
Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描写星空）
The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.(描写星空)