专题9 短文改错_2

（广东省深圳市2016年高三第二次调研）短文改错。
 
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
 
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
 
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
 
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
 
Last month, I was told we would have our first military training. At first, I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very strongly during these days, or we could easily get sunburnt. Later, when I was in the camp, I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple, but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!